This is my final of essay.I wouldn't like to write Japanese.I'm sorry.
Twenty-Year-Old People:(Should Not Be) Adults
In Japan, people who just turned twenty years old should not be adults. All people who are sixteen years old are allowed to get motorbike license, and girls are be able to get married. All people who are eighteen years old can get driver license, for boys are be able to get married. In Japan, to be an adult, the law states that one must be twenty years old. The issue is age. People who are over twenty-three years old should be adults compared to twenty year old people. Twenty year old people are a bad three reasons.
First, people who are twenty years old are still developing physically. They can smoke and drink alcohol by law, but these are not good for their bodies. They don’t know about smoking and drinking that well. They don’t know what will happen to their bodies. It’s proved medically that smoking causes lung cancer people who are under twenty years old get it easier than people who are over twenty. Alcohol destroys the nerve cell of the brain when people drink for many years, especially young people who started to drink from a young age. Their bodies are not ready for tobacco and alcohol. They are not old enough to smoke or drink.
Second, people who are about eighteen years old are developing mentally. They usually go to a university after high school. After that, they become working members of society, and then they understand the mechanism of society. They can learn a lot of new things in school, but they can not learn about the real world in school. They need not only scholastic ability, but also to work well with others.
Finally, these young people are too young to vote, because they are not interested in election of Japan. They have the vote but when we had the election for the house of councilors on July 19th 2007, twenties voted worst than all people by the association for promoting fair elections, because young people don’t know much about politics before they are working members of society.
Opponents say that adulthood should be twenty years old. They might be aware of their responsibility as adults, and would consciously be aware of adults. However, they are still young. They are growing up and the three years between twenty and twenty-three are very important years.
In conclusion, people who are twenty years old are still developing physically, don’t know much about society, and don’t think carefully about elections. Because the population young people is declining rapidly now, they are very important for Japan in the future. Times will have changed. Young people must be steady adults. People should not be adults until they are over twenty-three years old.
I got 98%!!